Tuesday, 28 September 2010

Unseen - Chapter two




The previous year every little feature, I've memorized of by heart. It was clear as day in my mind, like the entire year was all compacted into only yesterday.

I allowed the past to capture me once more and drag me back to those memories.


I had my back to everyone, as I investigated my locker. Tossing aside my bliss magazine and several notepads. Where was that reched english book? I contemplated. I really needed that book, on the account of Mrs Smith our english teacher, was one scary lady who would give you detention, in a blink of an eye, for a week just by saying one word in her class with out her permission. Burrowing deeper in amongst all my clutter, I found it discarded at the bottom of the locker. I sighed with relief and scooped it up.

"Karla" A guy called from behind me. I swirled around at my name being spoken and came face to face with Kit. He was a jock and appeared like one as well, with the traditional blue eyes and blond hair. "I know it's a month away, but I wanted to ask in advance..." He combed his hair with his fingers, a habit I realized he does when nervous. "Well what I'm asking is will you go to the prom with me?"

I hesitated, avoiding his eyes and gazed at my feet instead, like they were the most fascinating thing ever. But really what was on my feet were only a pair of black peep-toe heels, nothing exciting. "The thing is I've already agreed to go to the prom with some one else." I lied.

Looking up to see his expression, I noticed his eyes had now also dropped to his own feet. "Oh....So who you going with?" He muttered and I could sense jealousy in his voice.

"Well it's a secret." I lied again. However I wasn't going with anyone, not like he was the first to ask, since half the population of guys in my year had beaten him to the chase, but I declined them all. I was waiting for Nigel to ask me, though I don't think he knew I was alive, perhaps I should ask him.

It was getting quite uncomfortable this deadly silence that sweapt across us. We were both now staring at the ground and fidgeting.

Luckily Lila my best friend came and saved the day. Grabbing my arm and pulling me in the direction of english. "See yar" I said over my shoulder as I was getting hauled away and then to Lila "Thanks, it was getting a little awkward over there."

"Why else would I be doing this." Her voice was babyish and raised at the end of the sentence.

I shrugged, as we entered our english class room.

Though we're maybe sixteen, our class acted like a cluster of wild animals. There were the monkeys at the back throwing paper areoplanes and shouting at the top of their lungs (a.k.a the immature boys) The lionesses groomed them selves in the front row (cheerleaders) The lions (jocks) hang around the lionesses gawping at there beauty and there was the bold eagle over in the corner observing all the other animals (Nigel).

I took my place next to Lila in the centre of the room and minutes later everybody stoped what they were doing and sat straight in their chairs, with their work infront of them. As the clock struck 10 am, Mrs Smith marched in, always in time for her lesson, with a bundle of books cradled in her arms.

Prom nights from Hell - Unseen

Story one.
Chapter one

Music engulfed the gym hall, where 2009's prom was being held. A mass of sixteen year olds swayed to the slow tune with their partners. Another throng of teens, hovered at the back of the gym where refreshments were held. A gentle chime of voices vibrated throughout the room. Most of whom were eager to dance and have a good time.

I stood at the end of the large table, mounded high with scrumptious food. Which I couldn't even eat.

Near by a couple of cheerleaders and jocks were deep in conversation, oblivious to my presence.

I was invisble, no one was conscious of my being. Asides from last year, that was another story. Last year I was the center of attention, I wasn't a cheerleader, but I was popular. I had many admirers, yet I didn't like anyone of them. Since I was in love with Nigel, who didn't seem to share my feelings. He was mysterious and handsome, with bleached blond hair, dangerous grey eyes, he was also very tall and muscular.

I gulped back tears, not like I could cry any way, but I felt the golf ball deep in my throat and the urge to cry. My past was terrible and I wished I could move on.

A girl (Who's name I don't know) came strolling over to where I was, staring at the bowl of crisps that lay on the table behind me. Before I could move out of her way, she went straight through me. I gasped at the tingling sensation that spread over my whole body and the girl shivered, wrapping her arms around her self.




Thursday, 4 March 2010

Character list

1. Karla. She's popular, BFFL's with Lila & has a crush on Nigel. Gets killed and turns into a ghost...

2. Lila. Has many tallents, don't judge her by her looks, loves Kit & Karla's best friend. Sort of like Bonnie in Vampire Diaries and maybe Lulu in airhead. You discover she is a witch in story two.

3. Kit. Jock, suspect murderer, harmless, great mate Cody, has found out he loves Lila but still has feeling for Karla. Like Matt in Vampire Diaries and Mike in twilight...

4. Nigel. Goodlooking, mysterious & dangerous. Like Damon in Vamp Diaries. Is magicilal....

5. Mel. School gossip, Nosy, is a bad girl (smoking, sex, drugs, late night partying) also has bad habbit of chewing gum.

6. Jo. Kit's sister & BF's with Zoe

7. Zoe. Jo's good friend.

8. Cody. Kit's bestmate, athlete & cute. Plus he has a big mouth.

9. Mrs Smith. Scary & stupid.

10. James. Is a mediator (see's ghosts) Comes in, in story two. He's sweet.

11. Em. Girl died in the park, Diana's BF. (more coming soon)

12. Diana. Girl murdered in school, friends with Em, use to date Kit. (more coming soon)

13. Other girl (will find a name), she will also been kiled but after Karla (more coming soon)

Saturday, 2 January 2010

The Books
























It's Hell



It's Hell, Prom, Love, Dates, Hollidays & Vacations.....Plus Hotter and Kisses. Prom nights from Hell, Love is Hell, Dates are Hell, Hollidays are Hell, Vacations from Hell, Kisses from Hell & Hotter than Hell......Their stories are short and writen by the top authors at the time. Mine is like a fanfic but the story and characters are all my own creation. I've put this story also on Meg Cabot Message Board. Supernatural stories all conecting to the next story.